Congrats on getting published in the online mag. I read both, and they are quite different. Lived In seemed almost surreal with the only thing found in the flat being a wineglass. On My Feet had me wondering where you were going with the shoes thing until I read the last two lines and then it all made sense - something which I applaud you for. I like puzzling over a poem like that and then it all makes sense right at the end. Keep writing!
I read them both and could not decide which I liked better. But the wine glass did indeed raise my eyebrow with interest. As well you mentioned shoes and I could remember those terrible days when a dress shoe was needed. And I could feel the pain. Very descriptive. Good stuff.
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