Tuesday, 16 September 2008

Two Poems

My poems 'On My Feet' and 'Lived In' have gone up in the summer edition of Adagio Verse Quarterly. It can be found here: http://www.geocities.com/adagioversequarterly/p6.html


selonus said...

Congrats on getting published in the online mag. I read both, and they are quite different. Lived In seemed almost surreal with the only thing found in the flat being a wineglass. On My Feet had me wondering where you were going with the shoes thing until I read the last two lines and then it all made sense - something which I applaud you for. I like puzzling over a poem like that and then it all makes sense right at the end. Keep writing!

stu said...


Still said...

I read them both and could not decide which I liked better. But the wine glass did indeed raise my eyebrow with interest. As well you mentioned shoes and I could remember those terrible days when a dress shoe was needed. And I could feel the pain. Very descriptive. Good stuff.